Everything you do to promote your business makes some kind of impression: from your business card, to the way you answer the phone, your website, brochures, ads and letters, etc.
The question is: what kind of impression are you making?
What kind of impact?
Are your marketing and promotional materials electrifying
prospects and customers…or just bugging them?
That’s where my revise/rewrite service can make such a difference. I’ve been rewriting marketing materials for more than 25 years—for big name brands such as Hershey, Aim Toothpaste, Chase Bank, and Volvo, as well as for many, many small businesses.
So I know how to bring your materials to life, to make them much
more attention-getting, more engaging, more compelling, more believable,
more convincing. I know what it takes to electrify consumers and
get more results!
One of my clients was using an ad in farming magazines to generate leads for commercial greenhouses he was selling. He had been running this ad for years. I rewrote the ad and he got an immediate 45% increase in response.
An insurance company marketed their services via mailings and broadcast faxes. The information was sound—but they used a lot of technical insurance terms that their customers didn’t understand. I rewrote all of their materials, explaining terms more clearly.
After a year of using the materials I wrote, the president of the insurance company told me that—without changing anything else—their business had gone up 58%! The next year, using the same materials, their business went up another 100%!
With my revise/rewrite service, I’ll look at ways to improve the impressions you make and maximize the impact of everything you do—so that you can go beyond just bugging people and start electrifying them!
If you would like to explore this possibility with me, just send me an e-mail, and I’ll get back to you. The initial consultation is free—no pressure and no obligation.
Geoffery Moore